2012/07/09

Neverland Harvest

Ah, yes!
skies lofty light
cool
arm sway strong smooth
effortless
dry-sweet-weedless hay 
perfect
horse pace painless tranquil
contented
church truthful trusty
right
home sweet stablity
secure

Ever thus?
Never

Thanks to The Mag

8 comments:

Brian Miller said...

is it ever as tranquil...i dare say not...some fun verse though...nice use of alliteration...

Dick Jones said...

Form and message combine very effectively here.

Sue said...

I'm a dreamer who never says never.

;)

Berowne said...

Nice acerbic twist at the end. Did your mother come from Serbia? 'Cause there's something in you acerbic. :-)

Tess Kincaid said...

I really like the alternating single word throughout...nice...

miskmask said...

Lovely! I think you caught every item in the picture. :)

Short poems said...

Beautiful, you caught every item in the image!

elizabeth said...

Your conclusion is lovely and precise!
Bravo.
It is a pretty picture though.

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