is it ever as tranquil...i dare say not...some fun verse though...nice use of alliteration...
Form and message combine very effectively here.
I'm a dreamer who never says never.;)
Nice acerbic twist at the end. Did your mother come from Serbia? 'Cause there's something in you acerbic. :-)
I really like the alternating single word throughout...nice...
Lovely! I think you caught every item in the picture. :)
Beautiful, you caught every item in the image!
Your conclusion is lovely and precise!Bravo.It is a pretty picture though.
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