Ah, yes!
skies lofty light
cool
arm sway strong smooth
effortless
dry-sweet-weedless hay
perfect
horse pace painless tranquil
contented
church truthful trusty
right
home sweet stablity
secure
Ever thus?
Never
Thanks to The Mag
8 comments:
is it ever as tranquil...i dare say not...some fun verse though...nice use of alliteration...
Form and message combine very effectively here.
I'm a dreamer who never says never.
;)
Nice acerbic twist at the end. Did your mother come from Serbia? 'Cause there's something in you acerbic. :-)
I really like the alternating single word throughout...nice...
Lovely! I think you caught every item in the picture. :)
Beautiful, you caught every item in the image!
Your conclusion is lovely and precise!
Bravo.
It is a pretty picture though.
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