Your last line says it all.
ha the quick rhyme and the alliteration really drive this piece....i like it much... the second half in particular...'i remember'...smiles.
Love it!.. JJRod'z
This made me sigh softly, too.
I love the soft summer spirits and the anticipation of fall you played with in your poem, DCW. The images dance. Thank you for sharing this wonderful work. =D
Beautiful, so beautiful and fragile. I could hear the spirits sighing.
very nice....thanks for this
'I remember' ... how lovely.
Between outermost and innermost, I like the thought of that. A lovely poem, that lingers in the soul of wonder.
This has a full feel that i love
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Your last line says it all.
ha the quick rhyme and the alliteration really drive this piece....i like it much... the second half in particular...'i remember'...smiles.
Love it!..
JJRod'z
This made me sigh softly, too.
I love the soft summer spirits and the anticipation of fall you played with in your poem, DCW. The images dance. Thank you for sharing this wonderful work. =D
Beautiful, so beautiful and fragile. I could hear the spirits sighing.
very nice....thanks for this
'I remember' ... how lovely.
Between outermost and innermost, I like the thought of that. A lovely poem, that lingers in the soul of wonder.
This has a full feel that i love
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