2012/09/02

Summer spirits


shining solstice
or
soon September
summer spirits sigh softly

je me souviens

growth burgeoning abundance
giving falling collecting
warm memories
to be savoured
in the time of decline

Thanks to The Mag


10 comments:

Laurie Kolp said...

Your last line says it all.

Brian Miller said...

ha the quick rhyme and the alliteration really drive this piece....i like it much... the second half in particular...'i remember'...smiles.

JJ Roa Rodriguez said...

Love it!..

JJRod'z

Tess Kincaid said...

This made me sigh softly, too.

Linda said...

I love the soft summer spirits and the anticipation of fall you played with in your poem, DCW. The images dance. Thank you for sharing this wonderful work. =D

Ritva said...

Beautiful, so beautiful and fragile. I could hear the spirits sighing.

Wayne Pitchko said...

very nice....thanks for this

Helen said...

'I remember' ... how lovely.

Karen S. said...

Between outermost and innermost, I like the thought of that. A lovely poem, that lingers in the soul of wonder.

Chris Lawrence said...

This has a full feel that i love

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