A dance in the cosmic wind: Sorry Salvador

2013/02/24

Back in olden days

I was brought up right

Peeking in ladies' drawers

Weren't polite

But I can't resist

the forehead knob

Findin' your mind

Must be my job

What about

That matching pair

Should I investigate

Or simply stare?

Check out the liver?

Not today

Room in the womb?

You're too careful they say

I'll take a look

At bended knee

Can't imagine

What I'll see

Even here

You're quite disarming

But without your drawers

Far more charming

Thanks to the Mag

Berowne said...: Vivid, quixotic and - let's see, what else? How about fanciful?; 24 February 2013 at 10:33
Strummed Words said...: Oh, I like this clever and humorous piece!; 24 February 2013 at 10:45
Heidi said...: This was hilarious! I laughed all the way through. Thanks for the fun read!; 24 February 2013 at 13:07
Laurie Kolp said...: I really like this one!!; 24 February 2013 at 13:50
Jinksy said...: Great fun response! Thanks for the giggle. :-); 24 February 2013 at 14:21
Kathe W. said...: I imagine you will find the socks at bended knee! Very amusing and fun!; 24 February 2013 at 16:12
Yvonne Osborne said...: I love your cosmic blog. And this poem is delightful. Venus is indeed charming, with or without her drawers!; 24 February 2013 at 21:47
21 Wits said...: Such a fun clever twist- to this!; 25 February 2013 at 14:00
hyperCRYPTICal said...: Clever humourous write!

Anna :o]; 26 February 2013 at 04:36
Tess Kincaid said...: Far more charming is exactly was this is...; 27 February 2013 at 14:29