tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-222881951695778958.post7302054432473268902..comments2023-04-07T12:31:24.127-03:00Comments on A dance in the cosmic wind: RedDCWhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06477888352043819786noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-222881951695778958.post-3791327978400631222012-04-17T12:57:01.842-03:002012-04-17T12:57:01.842-03:00Truly beautiful...I had to read it out loud...Truly beautiful...I had to read it out loud...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-222881951695778958.post-29500796622674455242012-04-17T03:37:04.128-03:002012-04-17T03:37:04.128-03:00Thanks for this lovely poem, beautifully rhythmic ...Thanks for this lovely poem, beautifully rhythmic and rhymed.<br /><br />(But note - typing the two words doesn't prove I'm not a robot. It proves some cack-handed library somewhere has OCR software that doesn't work properly, and they want me to do their work for nothing! Get real!)Trellissimohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-222881951695778958.post-4777092889999713242012-04-17T03:33:40.086-03:002012-04-17T03:33:40.086-03:00This comment has been removed by the author.Trellissimohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-222881951695778958.post-79445592136706704332012-04-16T20:30:12.482-03:002012-04-16T20:30:12.482-03:00I like the form you used here.
It carries along th...I like the form you used here.<br />It carries along the feeling very nicely.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-222881951695778958.post-69816853377145128522012-04-16T13:10:45.288-03:002012-04-16T13:10:45.288-03:00oh nice capture of deep feeling in this...dreaming...oh nice capture of deep feeling in this...dreaming of such love and then waking alone...you layering with the flowers picked too soon...nice touch...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com