tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-222881951695778958.post7893616567335934862..comments2023-04-07T12:31:24.127-03:00Comments on A dance in the cosmic wind: UnwindDCWhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06477888352043819786noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-222881951695778958.post-76184328842805665702012-12-10T13:05:37.653-04:002012-12-10T13:05:37.653-04:00love how you incorporated the metronome feel into ...love how you incorporated the metronome feel into your poem!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-222881951695778958.post-38458935245379557102012-12-06T18:45:15.312-04:002012-12-06T18:45:15.312-04:00I guess even a metronome needs a rest. Nice one!I guess even a metronome needs a rest. Nice one!~T~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17969562036638831748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-222881951695778958.post-60354336600699594582012-12-03T16:33:38.011-04:002012-12-03T16:33:38.011-04:00My constancy a source of strength - perfectMy constancy a source of strength - perfectLLM Callinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17199375981896229914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-222881951695778958.post-7963873198361435432012-12-03T14:01:51.782-04:002012-12-03T14:01:51.782-04:00We both went with "un" this week...love ...We both went with "un" this week...love your jazzy spirit...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-222881951695778958.post-1050462070264363252012-12-03T13:18:50.250-04:002012-12-03T13:18:50.250-04:00Perfect! Last stanza blew me away, I could slow d...Perfect! Last stanza blew me away, I could slow dance to it ........Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-222881951695778958.post-58313226872111634682012-12-03T00:43:04.643-04:002012-12-03T00:43:04.643-04:00nicely done...thanks for sharingnicely done...thanks for sharingWaynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14873809564739628512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-222881951695778958.post-7554526459103416162012-12-03T00:42:30.228-04:002012-12-03T00:42:30.228-04:00I noticed immediately the rigid way this poem is a...I noticed immediately the rigid way this poem is arranged matches the words. It could possibly be a concrete poem. A visual treat as well as a literary one. Nice work!Lollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16526692343815904632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-222881951695778958.post-1016570885276212272012-12-02T18:03:51.463-04:002012-12-02T18:03:51.463-04:00I too have been wound. No re-wind, please. :-)I too have been wound. No re-wind, please. :-)Berownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-222881951695778958.post-38578032732170653672012-12-02T17:55:51.329-04:002012-12-02T17:55:51.329-04:00Sweet!Sweet!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-222881951695778958.post-86047653250208950122012-12-02T15:56:18.370-04:002012-12-02T15:56:18.370-04:00Or to the push/pull of classical beyond the bounda...Or to the push/pull of classical beyond the boundaries of the metronomic--beautiful write!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-222881951695778958.post-33589402888625435872012-12-02T15:44:23.433-04:002012-12-02T15:44:23.433-04:00I love the visual back and forth like a metronome....I love the visual back and forth like a metronome.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-222881951695778958.post-51292209024222151692012-12-02T14:36:06.746-04:002012-12-02T14:36:06.746-04:00jazz spirit freedom vs constancy- love it!jazz spirit freedom vs constancy- love it!Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-222881951695778958.post-19795538225629132342012-12-02T13:34:32.952-04:002012-12-02T13:34:32.952-04:00"the jazz ..."the jazz spirit freedom "<br /><br />I can taste those words. I like what they do to my senses ;-)Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-222881951695778958.post-2934131452525125372012-12-02T12:25:24.361-04:002012-12-02T12:25:24.361-04:00smiles...i like the contrast between the constancy...smiles...i like the contrast between the constancy and freedom in this....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-222881951695778958.post-48275412076668114752012-12-02T11:35:09.628-04:002012-12-02T11:35:09.628-04:00You're right, ours are a bit similar. I really...You're right, ours are a bit similar. I really enjoyed your take on it, especially your wording.Sam Jamiesonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11218188379110585401noreply@blogger.com