Horse and bird
you are real
your sinews strained
your breath painful
pale
by blue water
uncalm
unforgiving
untrue
Faun
you are dream
placed between
pain and obliteration
placid
unreal
choosing life
truth
Thanks to The Mag
11 comments:
Cold, raw, striking dream...nicely done...
I like the idea of the faun coming between the two of pain.
excellent- choosing life truth
First there is the truth
Then there is no truth
Then there is.
Apologies to Zen.
Yes, truth is life!
I can see this dance of life! Delicious!
love this.....thanks for sharing
What a wonderful title - I knew what followed would be superb. Very nice.
There's truth in every line. Congrats!
Nicely drawn contrast between reality and the dream.
You have captured the essence of each ...
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