As moon waxes and tide flows
I fear not light nor flood
nor luminous covering and completion
should I remain unmoved
My dread is the waning and the ebb
cruel darkness and departure
leaving me untouched
as I watch the dory's leaving
Thank you to Magpie Tales
4 comments:
I think that the words "hauntingly beautiful" are well applied to this one. It has stirred much introspection in me. I like it.
"my dread is the waning and the ebb", true feelings of being afraid of what is to come, terrific write
nice...love that your fear would be to be untouched...that is awesome...
This is just too beautiful...I had to read it three times...out loud...to feel satisfied...
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