2012/07/09

Neverland Harvest

Ah, yes!
skies lofty light
cool
arm sway strong smooth
effortless
dry-sweet-weedless hay 
perfect
horse pace painless tranquil
contented
church truthful trusty
right
home sweet stablity
secure

Ever thus?
Never

Thanks to The Mag

8 comments:

Brian Miller said...

is it ever as tranquil...i dare say not...some fun verse though...nice use of alliteration...

Dick Jones said...

Form and message combine very effectively here.

Susan Anderson said...

I'm a dreamer who never says never.

;)

Berowne said...

Nice acerbic twist at the end. Did your mother come from Serbia? 'Cause there's something in you acerbic. :-)

Tess Kincaid said...

I really like the alternating single word throughout...nice...

Anonymous said...

Lovely! I think you caught every item in the picture. :)

Short poems said...

Beautiful, you caught every item in the image!

elizabeth said...

Your conclusion is lovely and precise!
Bravo.
It is a pretty picture though.

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