I am looking
are you there?
Out here is sunlit
bright breeze
I can see forever
Down there is shadowed
dark stillness
Why do you not come out?
Why must I enter
where we cannot really see each other?
Why am I even searching?
Thanks to The Mag
9 comments:
sometimes we have to go into the darkness to bring the light eh? smiles...
Searching, its what we do.
rel
Good job!!!
Thanks for stopping by...I was surprised by my ending, too.
Sounds hopeless .. not giving up is the solution. Very nice!
I guess we just stop searching when we no longer breath... Nice post!.
JJRod'z
Your poem is a curiosity, pandora's box sort of thing..... who is lurking in the shadows? I enjoyed the contrasts between lightness and darkness. Thank you for sharing this.
We must search for it is who we are. Fine Mag!
Anna :o]
Because we can't stop ourselves?
Nicely done.
=)
Great job!
"Why must I enter where we cannot really see each other?" BEAUTIFUL!
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