2013/03/03

Dampness


Dampness
why do you hint losing
immediate
loss of pleasure
enduring
loss of love
forever
loss of life?

Water
are you not
source
refreshment
growth?

Not today.

He's gone.

Thanks to The Mag

8 comments:

Laurie Kolp said...

Sad, touching.

http://lkharris-kolp.blogspot.com/2013/03/ensconced-in-his-love.html

Theresa Milstein said...

Oh, such a sad last line.

Kathe W. said...

oh dear- very sad.

Kay said...

simple emotion beautifully written..

Tess Kincaid said...

Water can go either way...

Truedessa said...

Emotions overflowing..

Wayne Pitchko said...

I really like this lots....thanks for sharing your words

~T~ said...

Is she soaking in her own tears?

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