I look and look but cannot see
You're quite a mystery to me.
Is that a heart or is it liver?
Are those arrows; is that a quiver?
Is that your eye regarding mine?
My eye looks back to seek a sign.
All that's in this coalescing
Circling group has got me guessing.
The fence of my old school perspective
May block my view of non-objective.
Thanks to the Mag
8 comments:
Nice rhyming; well thought-out, well expressed.
smiles...nice rhythm in your words...and as you can tell by the responses each of our eyes are different in what we see...
such cadence
you really have a talent here...
and I thank you for your kind comment about mine...truly,I appreciate it
I love the words in your blog header by the way
A nice interpretation of a tightly wrapped box. Tight write.
I LOVE this ...
Like the others, I love the cadence of this one, as well as the quizzical observation of the work. Nicely done.
You made the mystery of this painting a lot of fun..a well told tale!
I enjoyed your poetry craft-work, to say nothing of your insights to modern art!
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